Prospectus starts off well with clear information about the background of project idea, however it didn't adequate supporting design materials that demonstrate the proposed project idea and its UX, materials such as visual interface, flowchart, content structure should be included. Taking into consideration of page layout and typography arrangement can further enhance the presentation of prospectus. Accuracy and tone of English are not consistent (especially under User-testing section).
Good coverage of content in my presentation although time management can be improved further (I've spent too much time just to introduce what is 'upcycle'). Managing my pace of talking could enhanced the effectiveness of presentation and panel experience. The biggest disadvantage of my presentation is that i missed to demonstrate any supporting design materials of the proposed website - interface design, flowchart, content structure and etc. This it was incomplete for panel to understand fully the project idea.
Questions:
Who the real buyer would be?
The effort of up-cycling is at the moment poses no real benefit emotional bridge for call to action to buyers.
Is it like etsy+artforgrabs+artmarket in e platform?
Non-profit organisation need to be identified and proceeds how to is it to be managed?
